BIRDS ON A WIRE

For writing, Mrs Lunn's kids have been watching short film and writing about them.  These are narrative stories that can go along with the short film.

Watch the film and read our stories...

We hope you like them!

One day some birds sat on line and along came a blue and tall bird.  It almost fell off but it flew up and up and sat on the line.  The line went down and down.  The birds pinged up in the sky and all their feathers fell off and they were naked!
By Lloyd

The Birds were flying from their house to a wire so they landed on it and they looked to their left and saw a big blue bird and he flew over to it and it fell down and they were not happy.  The big blue bird fell down and they pulled him down.  It flew into the air.  They fell down and the feathers flew off! Poof! They were naked!
By Quinn G

When I went to the wires I saw a big blue bird and then I saw three little birds and we saw them on a wire.  Then they started biting.  I laughed.  They got pinged into the sky.   He fell off and they flew up to space and they came back naked!
By Alec